<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" version="2.0"><channel><title><![CDATA[Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">The sound of your voice, a joke a conversation-<br />
The most simple things can change the weight of an entire day.</p>
<p dir="auto">You are the light in the room when its dark.<br />
a sign of peace in the chaos</p>
<p dir="auto">I never thought when i met you<br />
my whole world begin to change<br />
like something missing finally found</p>
<p dir="auto">I try to describe this feeling<br />
but i can't-<br />
I'm tongue twisted<br />
lost in thoughts that rush faster than I can hold them<br />
sweeping me away and leaving me astray</p>
<p dir="auto">Every time I reach for it,<br />
it slips through my hands again</p>
<p dir="auto">Yet you remain-<br />
an anchor in rough tides,<br />
keeping me steady when I drift too far.</p>
<p dir="auto">This feeling is so unfamiliar to me.<br />
this caring, passion this kindness I cant fully understand.</p>
<p dir="auto">It overwhelms me.<br />
pulling me in but pushing me back at the same time..</p>
<p dir="auto">When I put up walls to you defences built from fear.<br />
You dont break them-<br />
You simply find a way through.<br />
Like you were never ment to be kept out.</p>
<p dir="auto">You don't take advantage of my vulnerability.<br />
You welcome it.<br />
You understand it.</p>
<p dir="auto">And when I was lost, you found me<br />
You know the pain of being used<br />
Of feeling broken and confused<br />
Yet you choose to stay with me</p>
<p dir="auto">You bring calm when the chaos starts<br />
And stitch together the fractured parts<br />
A world once painted gray and cold<br />
Now filled with colors shine and bold</p>
<p dir="auto">And though theses verses try there best<br />
The truth remains within by chest<br />
No rhyme or line could quite convey<br />
The gratitude I feel today.</p>
<p dir="auto">For few words could ever describe you<br />
Or all the things you help me through<br />
Yet if one truth remains to say-<br />
I'm grateful that you came my way</p>
<p dir="auto">(I tried to spell everything corret because I have shaky hands so it took a very long time i know some people dont understand that but thats ok I hope you guys like it let me know what you think love everyone)</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/topic/21000/another-poem-wht-u-think-its-done-read-it-please-give-feedback-if-u-read-it</link><generator>RSS for Node</generator><lastBuildDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 05:52:11 GMT</lastBuildDate><atom:link href="https://browsedns.net/topic/21000.rss" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml"/><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:22:15 GMT</pubDate><ttl>60</ttl><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 02:50:14 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">i need feedback</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235506</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235506</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 02:50:14 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 01:22:03 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/foxyfemboy">@<bdi>foxyfemboy</bdi></a> do you have any recommendations on how i can improve</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235407</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235407</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 01:22:03 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 01:11:44 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">thank u man</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235391</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235391</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 01:11:44 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:20:51 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/jace123">@<bdi>Jace123</bdi></a> Nah man I think you're good.</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235338</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235338</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[FlavPlaz45129]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:20:51 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:19:37 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/flavplaz45129">@<bdi>FlavPlaz45129</bdi></a> said in <a href="/post/235333">Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it</a>:</p>
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<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/jace123">@<bdi>Jace123</bdi></a> I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.</p>
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<p dir="auto">Yeah i always do i have tremors so its hard to type perfectly all the times like i wamt feedback if u see anythng tht is lackng in my poems</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235337</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235337</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:19:37 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:15:38 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/jace123">@<bdi>Jace123</bdi></a> I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235333</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235333</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[FlavPlaz45129]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:15:38 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:14:14 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/flavplaz45129">@<bdi>FlavPlaz45129</bdi></a>  how can improve tho</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235332</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235332</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2026 00:14:14 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 23:19:42 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">lmk how i can improve</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235286</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235286</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 23:19:42 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 23:03:06 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/foxyfemboy">@<bdi>foxyfemboy</bdi></a>  thank you</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235265</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235265</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 23:03:06 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 22:35:04 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">not bad u did amazing</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235242</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235242</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[foxyfemboy]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 22:35:04 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 22:02:05 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">thank u</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235220</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235220</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 22:02:05 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:53:53 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/jace123">@<bdi>Jace123</bdi></a> I LIKE IT!!! W JACE!</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235204</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235204</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[FlavPlaz45129]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:53:53 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:52:42 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/flavplaz45129">@<bdi>FlavPlaz45129</bdi></a>  wht do u think</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235202</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235202</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:52:42 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:42:23 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">hope u like it it took a while</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235176</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235176</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:42:23 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:40:29 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto"><a class="plugin-mentions-user plugin-mentions-a" href="/user/4r14">@<bdi>4R14</bdi></a> thanks reread it im done</p>
]]></description><link>https://browsedns.net/post/235174</link><guid isPermaLink="true">https://browsedns.net/post/235174</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[Jace123]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:40:29 GMT</pubDate></item><item><title><![CDATA[Reply to Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it on Sun, 09 Aug 2026 21:26:13 GMT]]></title><description><![CDATA[<p dir="auto">this is actually amazing</p>
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