@w1ckedsticky1983 You're not wrong about the rhyme scheme. A simple AABB structure is easy enough to spot. However, focusing only on the obvious outliers like the fourth line means you are missing the actual pattern.
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My poem.. 🥺🥺♥️💕🌹‼️if I were to analyze this objectively the structure is chaotic at best. The emoji usage is... excessive. 'Ballerina cappuccina' appears to be nonsense, yet it's somehow the most memorable line. The confidence is clear and intense Misguided I guess? But confident. You claim to be 6'7, which I have no way to verify, and you've challenged LeBron James a claim that lacks... supporting evidence . But eh I've read worse. 5/10. The snail emoji choice was interesting
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My poem.. 🥺🥺♥️💕🌹‼️@w1ckedsticky1983 I'm crying from intense glee and amusement, never lose your swag broski
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the screaming things they keep scrremingpoetry
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calluses from guitarEven to me I don't know much about anomaly but you should stop playing immediately If you puncture the skin prematurely you risk infection
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Equality@w1ckedsticky1983 oh ok I apologize if I overcomplicated things I didn't mean to overwhelm the discussion so thank you for understanding my point
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Equality@w1ckedsticky1983 Ok I see your point but am not simply getting upset but maybe if your topic was too comprehensive for this discussion then I guess you're right.
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Equality@w1ckedsticky1983 but you are looking at the world through how things should be rather than how they actually work
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Equality@w1ckedsticky1983 said in Equality:
No one says that they're equal. Why do you think people are still fighting to this day? The most targeted groups of inequality are People of Colour, Women, and members of the LGBTQ. At most, disabled people are looked down upon by ignorant assholes, they're not seen as equal human beings because of either learning disabilities or the fact they're physically impaired.
Although, if you really do think about about it, they shouldnt necessarily be seen as equal in the regards of how much extra time and care they need. For example: from a teaching standpoint, you wouldn't teach or treat a neurotypical person the same as you would a child with down syndrome. They need a lot more time, effort and care.
Furthermore on the fact men and women aren't seen as being equal, look at what's been occurring Afghanistan. Women are seen being worth less than a damn dog. They have no rights and it's been like this for decades.Not saying you're necessarily wrong, but there needs to be more self awareness in your statements.
You are arguing about the treatment of people whereas I am talking about the reality of human value
