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  • YourAriesBestieY Offline
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    YourAriesBestie
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    wrote on last edited by YourAriesBestie
    #1

    Over my time on BDNS i've written quite a few poems 😅
    But I want your opinions, which was the best, worst and what I could do to improve, what you like about it. I'll try my best to organise them into a tag category. Thanks :3

    I've grouped them all into Aries Poems, if you just click on it they should all show up :3

    ☆★Living loud, loving red★☆

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    • RiaR Offline
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      Ria
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      #2

      ok

      DNI 🚫
      ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
      -Are toxic
      -Are lying about your age
      -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
      -Come for drama, trolling
      -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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        Ria
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        #3

        can u plz go to dms?

        DNI 🚫
        ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
        -Are toxic
        -Are lying about your age
        -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
        -Come for drama, trolling
        -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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        • RiaR Offline
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          Ria
          WILLOW+RIA SHIPPERS BDNS RENOVATORS Ria Pookie Bears Mel's friends dqrkk pookies <3 Danganronpa V4 ##adhd Autistic peeps artist's.. Spotify ig neurodivergent Gay People P!ATD fans Karen M McManus fans riverdale fans Lesbians of DNS resource center
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          #4

          just reply to them as topics and then they are all recent

          DNI 🚫
          ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
          -Are toxic
          -Are lying about your age
          -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
          -Come for drama, trolling
          -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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          • RiaR Ria

            ok

            YuniY Offline
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            Xyuin's Beloveds HNP CLUB!!! Banned
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            #5

            @ria never heard anything better🔥🔥 /j

            Getting banned soon!!
            XOXO

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            • YuniY Yuni

              @ria never heard anything better🔥🔥 /j

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              Ria
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              #6

              @Yuni-Just-weird nooo, that wasnt a rating silly billy that was me saying sure lol
              (ik ur being /s)

              DNI 🚫
              ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
              -Are toxic
              -Are lying about your age
              -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
              -Come for drama, trolling
              -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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              • RiaR Ria

                @Yuni-Just-weird nooo, that wasnt a rating silly billy that was me saying sure lol
                (ik ur being /s)

                YuniY Offline
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                Yuni
                Xyuin's Beloveds HNP CLUB!!! Banned
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                #7

                @Ria even more fire 🔥/j

                Getting banned soon!!
                XOXO

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                • YourAriesBestieY Offline
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                  wrote on last edited by
                  #8

                  I've finally grouped them all into Aries Poems, Warning the older ones are either depressing or downright awful 😭

                  ☆★Living loud, loving red★☆

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                  • YourAriesBestieY YourAriesBestie

                    I've finally grouped them all into Aries Poems, Warning the older ones are either depressing or downright awful 😭

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                    Ria
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                    #9

                    @YourAriesBestie how do u do that? ive been looking for a way to do somethig like that

                    DNI 🚫
                    ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
                    -Are toxic
                    -Are lying about your age
                    -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
                    -Come for drama, trolling
                    -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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                    • RiaR Ria

                      @YourAriesBestie how do u do that? ive been looking for a way to do somethig like that

                      YourAriesBestieY Offline
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                      #10

                      @Ria Theres a section at the bottom whenever you make a topic, it says something like enter tags, just click on it and type whatever

                      ☆★Living loud, loving red★☆

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                      • RiaR Offline
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                        Ria
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                        #11

                        ohh i didnt know u coulddo that, can u make it so none els uses that tag, like privatise it?

                        DNI 🚫
                        ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
                        -Are toxic
                        -Are lying about your age
                        -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
                        -Come for drama, trolling
                        -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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                        • RiaR Ria

                          ohh i didnt know u coulddo that, can u make it so none els uses that tag, like privatise it?

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                          Forum Moderator Senior Staff Detective
                          wrote on last edited by
                          #12

                          @Ria No, That's the whole reason they exist 😭

                          ☆★Living loud, loving red★☆

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                          • YourAriesBestieY YourAriesBestie

                            @Ria No, That's the whole reason they exist 😭

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                            wrote on last edited by
                            #13

                            @YourAriesBestie ohhhh

                            DNI 🚫
                            ped0s, preds, or contacting minors 4 inappropriate reasons ❌
                            -Are toxic
                            -Are lying about your age
                            -Don’t respect boundaries or my friends/family
                            -Come for drama, trolling
                            -Be kind, respectful, and safe—or stay away. I like chaos and fun-but will not tolerate unsafe/predatory behavior .

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