a song i wrote

[A Former User]

this is the song im still working on

[logen churchel]

i got an idea what if you talk about having lots of cash or go more in depth of how you are living your dream? and remember in music rythym and rhyme is everything

[Karyami_Nariami]

@logen-churchel @super-pikachu ay nice lyrics you two

[Karyami_Nariami]

@super-pikachu i tried singing it and following the rythym and it just didn't feel right

[Karyami_Nariami]

had to use another rythym to make it feel right

[A Former User]

^The Person Above Is Me^

[A Former User]

Here's My Song (Work In Progress)

[A Former User]

My Life Felt Empty, Like A Blank Canvas. Until I Met You. Life Was Hopeless, Until I Met You, You Were Lonely And Had Nothing To Do, And....I Need You, And Only You! You're The Light Of Life, You Shine Brighter Than The Stars On A Night Sky And That Is Why....When I Saw You I Had A Really Strange Feelin'..And Next Thing I Know I Wasn't Movin'....You Are The Only One I Need....(Ye That Is It So Far)

[logen churchel]

is this hey there Delilah by plain white tees?

[logen churchel]

@SooNotAlyssa5631 ?

[logen churchel]

@logen-churchel nvm it sounded similar for some reason

[A Former User]

Oh-

[logen churchel]

@SooNotAlyssa5631 your fine i guess i was just thinking of the song when i was reading it.

[A Former User]

It Has A Really Good Rhythm Honestly

[logen churchel]

@SooNotAlyssa5631 it does