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    😭 I don't have a title because I feel like it just comes to after I start writing out the plot- Y'all, add this to the other drafts I have!

    Prologue

    They say it’s incurable. That this is going to stay with me for the rest of my life; until the day I die. How am I supposed to react to that? Am I supposed to accept this, and continue living my life as though everything were okay?
    My parents are next to me, bawling their eyes out. I’m sitting there, my expression blank as I hear the doctor rant about how this is going to possibly kill me before I get to experience life.
    “...our best scientists have tried everything possible, yet they haven’t been able to create a cure for this disease. We believe it might spread towards other important parts of the body, like organs, to the point where you might have difficulty breathing–”
    “How can you call them your best scientists if they can’t make a cure?” I interrupt, my eyes blankly staring at the desk as my hands start to nervously fidget with the other.
    “Excuse me?”
    “They’re your best scientists, no? Then why can’t they make me better?”
    “They’re not perfect.”
    “Then just call them normal scientists. There’s no reason to over exaggerate and call them something they’re obviously not.”
    “I’m not going to allow this amount of disrespect–”
    “Then I’ll find myself another doctor that will actually try to save my life.” On that happy note, I stand up and run a hand through my thinning hair, a deep sigh escaping me as I realize I don’t have long before I move on to the afterlife.
    Is there even an afterlife?
    I shake my head, rattling the wild thoughts in my brain before walking out of the disgusting, pale room where I just received my death sentence.
    Is this it? Am I really going to die? What am I supposed to do? Silence fills my brain as I ask myself that overwhelming question. Then, an intrusive thought hits me like a freight train.
    Just die.

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      Yes

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        Yes

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        @Amelia-Ravenhex lol thank you 😭

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          @Amelia-Ravenhex lol thank you 😭

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          @hxney_4ngel yw angel

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            @hxney_4ngel yw angel

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            @Amelia-Ravenhex Oooh I might have POV's!

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              @Amelia-Ravenhex Oooh I might have POV's!

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              @hxney_4ngel oooo

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                😭 I don't have a title because I feel like it just comes to after I start writing out the plot- Y'all, add this to the other drafts I have!

                Prologue

                They say it’s incurable. That this is going to stay with me for the rest of my life; until the day I die. How am I supposed to react to that? Am I supposed to accept this, and continue living my life as though everything were okay?
                My parents are next to me, bawling their eyes out. I’m sitting there, my expression blank as I hear the doctor rant about how this is going to possibly kill me before I get to experience life.
                “...our best scientists have tried everything possible, yet they haven’t been able to create a cure for this disease. We believe it might spread towards other important parts of the body, like organs, to the point where you might have difficulty breathing–”
                “How can you call them your best scientists if they can’t make a cure?” I interrupt, my eyes blankly staring at the desk as my hands start to nervously fidget with the other.
                “Excuse me?”
                “They’re your best scientists, no? Then why can’t they make me better?”
                “They’re not perfect.”
                “Then just call them normal scientists. There’s no reason to over exaggerate and call them something they’re obviously not.”
                “I’m not going to allow this amount of disrespect–”
                “Then I’ll find myself another doctor that will actually try to save my life.” On that happy note, I stand up and run a hand through my thinning hair, a deep sigh escaping me as I realize I don’t have long before I move on to the afterlife.
                Is there even an afterlife?
                I shake my head, rattling the wild thoughts in my brain before walking out of the disgusting, pale room where I just received my death sentence.
                Is this it? Am I really going to die? What am I supposed to do? Silence fills my brain as I ask myself that overwhelming question. Then, an intrusive thought hits me like a freight train.
                Just die.

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                @hxney_4ngel said in Would you read this?:

                😭 I don't have a title because I feel like it just comes to after I start writing out the plot- Y'all, add this to the other drafts I have!

                Prologue

                They say it’s incurable. That this is going to stay with me for the rest of my life; until the day I die. How am I supposed to react to that? Am I supposed to accept this, and continue living my life as though everything were okay?
                My parents are next to me, bawling their eyes out. I’m sitting there, my expression blank as I hear the doctor rant about how this is going to possibly kill me before I get to experience life.
                “...our best scientists have tried everything possible, yet they haven’t been able to create a cure for this disease. We believe it might spread towards other important parts of the body, like organs, to the point where you might have difficulty breathing–”
                “How can you call them your best scientists if they can’t make a cure?” I interrupt, my eyes blankly staring at the desk as my hands start to nervously fidget with the other.
                “Excuse me?”
                “They’re your best scientists, no? Then why can’t they make me better?”
                “They’re not perfect.”
                “Then just call them normal scientists. There’s no reason to over exaggerate and call them something they’re obviously not.”
                “I’m not going to allow this amount of disrespect–”
                “Then I’ll find myself another doctor that will actually try to save my life.” On that happy note, I stand up and run a hand through my thinning hair, a deep sigh escaping me as I realize I don’t have long before I move on to the afterlife.
                Is there even an afterlife?
                I shake my head, rattling the wild thoughts in my brain before walking out of the disgusting, pale room where I just received my death sentence.
                Is this it? Am I really going to die? What am I supposed to do? Silence fills my brain as I ask myself that overwhelming question. Then, an intrusive thought hits me like a freight train.
                Just die.

                This is the POV of Maria Sanchez! Let me know if you would like for me to post the chapters as I write them lol

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                  Please leave title ideas down below- Brain dead rn

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                    Title idea: A cure for neglect

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                      Title idea: A cure for neglect

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                      @Luna Hmm.. Pretty good but not really the thing I'm looking for...

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                        Title idea: A cure for neglect

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                        @Luna OOOH! WHAT ABOUT, "Cure For Me"?!?!?!

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                          Title idea: A cure for neglect

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                          @Luna Noo.. too basic...

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                            I'd read it, it's a great book!

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                              I'd read it, it's a great book!

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                              @Izzy_Is_Dizzy Thanks

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                                @Izzy_Is_Dizzy Thanks

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                                @hxney_4ngel np 👍

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                                  @hxney_4ngel np 👍

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                                  @Izzy_Is_Dizzy :)

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                                    @hxney_4ngel said in Would you read this?:

                                    😭 I don't have a title because I feel like it just comes to after I start writing out the plot- Y'all, add this to the other drafts I have!

                                    Prologue

                                    They say it’s incurable. That this is going to stay with me for the rest of my life; until the day I die. How am I supposed to react to that? Am I supposed to accept this, and continue living my life as though everything were okay?
                                    My parents are next to me, bawling their eyes out. I’m sitting there, my expression blank as I hear the doctor rant about how this is going to possibly kill me before I get to experience life.
                                    “...our best scientists have tried everything possible, yet they haven’t been able to create a cure for this disease. We believe it might spread towards other important parts of the body, like organs, to the point where you might have difficulty breathing–”
                                    “How can you call them your best scientists if they can’t make a cure?” I interrupt, my eyes blankly staring at the desk as my hands start to nervously fidget with the other.
                                    “Excuse me?”
                                    “They’re your best scientists, no? Then why can’t they make me better?”
                                    “They’re not perfect.”
                                    “Then just call them normal scientists. There’s no reason to over exaggerate and call them something they’re obviously not.”
                                    “I’m not going to allow this amount of disrespect–”
                                    “Then I’ll find myself another doctor that will actually try to save my life.” On that happy note, I stand up and run a hand through my thinning hair, a deep sigh escaping me as I realize I don’t have long before I move on to the afterlife.
                                    Is there even an afterlife?
                                    I shake my head, rattling the wild thoughts in my brain before walking out of the disgusting, pale room where I just received my death sentence.
                                    Is this it? Am I really going to die? What am I supposed to do? Silence fills my brain as I ask myself that overwhelming question. Then, an intrusive thought hits me like a freight train.
                                    Just die.

                                    This is the POV of Maria Sanchez! Let me know if you would like for me to post the chapters as I write them lol

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                                    @hxney_4ngel Depends On What Its About, Genre, Story, All That Is Important To Make A Title My Friend.

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                                      10/10 You Needa Send Me That Book Once It's Finished.

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                                        10/10 You Needa Send Me That Book Once It's Finished.

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                                        @SooNotAlyssa5631 I'll try...

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                                          @SooNotAlyssa5631 I'll try...

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                                          @hxney_4ngel I'm Trusting You With My Address. /j

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