silk
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a spider reaches its silver thread down into hell to save the sinner who saved its life long ago. it was now a じゅろがも (jurogamo is a mythical creature in Japanese mythology, its what happens when a spider gets old and becomes part human) the spider was in the water of a lake, drowing when they saved it. they now must return the favor as now they are in a pool of red. the spider's silk is noticed by many souls, and as they all grab on it breaks and leaves the soul of the 処女 (girl) stranded in her hellish abyss. sobbing, screaming for a way out, reaching her hands out tords the bright light where the opening of hell was and where the じゅろがも had her silk. now the 処女 knew she wouldn't ever be saved. none was there to save her and her crys blured into the masses of sinners. none could ever pull her from the abyss.
the silk dissolved in the hands of the forsaken souls.
she knew she'd never leave.... hell wasn't permanent, yes. but it was a long time to wait. -
is this good?