Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it

[Jace123]

thank u

[foxyfemboy]

not bad u did amazing

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy thank you

[Jace123]

lmk how i can improve

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 how can improve tho

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 said in Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it:

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

Yeah i always do i have tremors so its hard to type perfectly all the times like i wamt feedback if u see anythng tht is lackng in my poems

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 Nah man I think you're good.

[Jace123]

thank u man

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy do you have any recommendations on how i can improve

[Jace123]

i need feedback