Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy do you have any recommendations on how i can improve

[Jace123]

i need feedback

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Summer is hot,
"I like you Mrs. Barenger, i like you a lot."

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Hatred must end,
"You must never refer to Japanese people as our little yellow friend!"

[Jace123]

@welcome2myworld wa?

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Pink is cute,
If you don't understand me,
I WILL GIVE YA THE BOOT!!

[Jace123]

what?

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Red as a rose,
This case is not open,
You can shove it up ya nose!

[[[global:former-user]]]

rose r red vilotes r blue i like this peom and u should too

[Jace123]

@itscookiebear tuff

[Jace123]

@welcome2myworld when will i understand you lol

[Jace123]

its like a riddle lol

[Chicken]

W in da chat

[Jace123]

@Chicken thoughts on the poem?

[Chicken]

@Jace123 it's really good

[Jace123]

thanks

[Jace123]

@Vulpinefox this is an example if u need one

[Jace123]

I hope it helps @Vulpinefox

[[[global:former-user]]]

@Jace123 thx :)

[Jace123]

@Vulpinefox no problem