Two more orginals could i be a good song writer or nah?
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im not lyrically gifted but i try T_T
slow motion (i was like 18 when i made it)
Now and then im afraid of the clock on the wall of my heart suddenly i realize that im not the child i thought can i catch the time? (no) i dont wanna speed through life oh but ive been fading (chorus) ive been through some emotions ive been changing my life is like an ocean its been waving can i catch up with time? (no) i dont wanna waste my life oh but ive been ageing (not gonna do verse two i dont want my song stolen
where they go (idk might have been 17)
like a ship on the ocean were all moving to the motion just like an hourglass turned on its side were all running out of time (chorus) take me to the place where the children go take me where the clocks doht work no more (dont really like this song anymore so verse two) like the fishes to the sea we all follow different streams dont live your life foolishly cause you never know when the end will great (chorus again) (Bridge) im running out of time, time aint a friend of mine (repeats like 2x) (hook ?) you only dream when your alseep you never know when the end will greet (repeats)wheni first started writing music i didn't know hpw to structure a song im trying to get better criticism is welcome
