Tired original song by me

[Enchanted]

"im tired of always being tired and im tired of saying that im tired
And im tired of tryna find words to rhyme with tired
Yeah im tired, im tired, im tired... tired of being tired
I try to live my life but it gets harder
I try to tell myself tomorrow will be brighter
And i try to pick myself up but i get heavier yeah i try, i try , i try
But im tired.... tired of being tired
(bridge) Can someone help me figure it out
Theres no five hour energy that can save me now
Help me clue me what to do
Dont give me a drug cause none of them do what their suppose to do
Sad but true...."

very repetitive think i was 15? when i wrote this also can yall please look at my other original songs i posted i really would like feedback on those im trying to get better at song writinggggggg!!! thxs <3

[Forsaknbe]

its... i have no words

[Enchanted]

@waterbottl trash i know

[A Former User]

@Enchanted You should definitely upload that to the channel be in bed when singing it too

[Enchanted]

@YourAriesBestie thats so smarttttt

[A Former User]

@Enchanted An do it the second you wake up to make it more realistic!!

[Enchanted]

@LI4SPUR3L0V3 but i'll have morning voice

[A Former User]

@Enchanted But that's the point!!

[Enchanted]

@LI4SPUR3L0V3 you haven't heard my morning voice....

[A Former User]

@Enchanted Idc, also I somehow have a thing for morning voices

[Sup3rSwaggyy1983]

yall lowk make me wana start writing sum...i dunno what-but sumthin

[Enchanted]

@Sparkl3Ra1nbo0mz write anything! i have enough original songs for two albums my goal is to write 100

[Sup3rSwaggyy1983]

@Enchanted but the thing is-im not sure what to write about and im not good at poems im better at writing stories tbh-

[Enchanted]

@Sparkl3Ra1nbo0mz doesn't have to be a song just write whatever you feel <3

[Sup3rSwaggyy1983]

@Enchanted im gonna write abt how much i love fruity gayboys and tig ol biddies-

[Enchanted]

@Sparkl3Ra1nbo0mz ight

[Sup3rSwaggyy1983]

@Enchanted Like in kali uchi's own words, " un corazon como el tuyo esta en extincion, heaven must have sent you to earth, la favorita de dios, la favorita de dios, and it shows" frr like vro (she totally was talkin abt that...totallyyy

[A Former User]

@Enchanted Like- I'd marry anyone with a morning voice

[Enchanted]

@Sparkl3Ra1nbo0mz i love herrrrr

[Sup3rSwaggyy1983]

@Enchanted I DO TOO XD