Song writing challenge

[Enchanted]

@Andyboi

in a world carved from stone and light
ive wanderd far and wide
five years of battle fought in silence
a creeping chill a rattling bone a whisper in the night
a skeletons arrow flies and ends my blocky life

chorus idea 1
i fell to a skeleton during the night
a lifetimes work just slipping by
one shot from darkness... (idk where to go from there)

chorus idea 2
i died to a skeleton in this ???? land
five years of crafting slipping through my hands
one shot from darkness my world turns cold
but i'll rose again in ... ??? (idkkkkk)

[Sage05]

whats coming to my mind is somethin that sounds raw: harsh electric guitar, raspy vocals, but a slow tempo with little action from the drums; it'll sound like anger that stems from isloation..and maybe a fear fom falling in love again after a cruel break up?

[Enchanted]

@Sage05 niceeeee

[Enchanted]

gotta get back into my teenage angst

[TheAndyboi]

@Sage05 makes me think of Big Long Now by Nirvana, not much the lyrics

[A Former User]

@Sage05 w

[YourAriesBestie]

@Enchanted
Don't be sad,
be maaaaadd!
Its time to rock
your eardrums
beware!
idk

[Yuni]

Stupid You.

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I Always Loved ya
Now, I hate ya
You took my heart
And broke it.

It seems That smiles
are not everything
a bit crazy
There's something wrong

I think i realized
Not only am I tired of love?
I'm tired of Everything you did to me
I'm tired of hearing your loud annoying words
Your stupid annoying words
With your dumb action

I'm tired of everything you did to me
Stupidity 24/7
Your stupid Words
with your stupid action
makes the stupidest thing alive
I regret loving Stupid You.

(Chorus)

Because loving you made me realize
how pointless and stupid love is
I don't understand, I'm tired Of stupid you.
(Repeat last chorus)

[A Former User]

@Gabii w

[Yuni]

@iBruh

[Enchanted]

@Gabii this is perfect