wake me up when forever ends
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my eyes drip sweet nectar, and you come to drink.
as my heart continues to sink. i am floating in limbo,
a hell of my own making, i close my eyes and i ask "wake me up when forever ends?" no reply comes to your mind. my arms are wrapped in rose thorns, and they crawl up my face. i ask again, "wake me up when forever ends?" no answer. im alone. there's none but me here in this deap abyss. i want escape but i just ask again. "wake me up when forever ends?" as i expected. no answer. i look to you and smile weakly; i ask "why am i here?" no answer.
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when forever ends.and the thorns completely swallow me whole. i can't see anymore.
i drift to sleep. thinking about you. maybe don't wake me at all.i'm tired, you still whisper sweet nothingness into my ears. i hear nothing anymore.
i'm not afraid, i feel nothing. but you still sit by me, even if you aren't really there. you wake me up but i beg you to just let me be. i'm very tired of reality.
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what does Arises think about my writing? mine aren't as popular as yours but are they any good?
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what does Arises think about my writing? mine aren't as popular as yours but are they any good?
@Yanderemenhera
Arises??
It's ARIES
uhh, but yeah I like it :3
I loved the separated wake me up very creative B3 -
i use the bizarre spacing in my poetry a lot
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i have poems up on my youtube with the same stile lol, but they are pretty dark ngl