wake me up when forever ends

Yanderemenhera

my eyes drip sweet nectar, and you come to drink.
as my heart continues to sink. i am floating in limbo,
a hell of my own making, i close my eyes and i ask "wake me up when forever ends?" no reply comes to your mind. my arms are wrapped in rose thorns, and they crawl up my face. i ask again, "wake me up when forever ends?" no answer. im alone. there's none but me here in this deap abyss. i want escape but i just ask again. "wake me up when forever ends?" as i expected. no answer. i look to you and smile weakly; i ask "why am i here?" no answer.
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when forever ends.

and the thorns completely swallow me whole. i can't see anymore.
i drift to sleep. thinking about you. maybe don't wake me at all.

i'm tired, you still whisper sweet nothingness into my ears. i hear nothing anymore.

i'm not afraid, i feel nothing. but you still sit by me, even if you aren't really there. you wake me up but i beg you to just let me be. i'm very tired of reality.

Yanderemenhera

what does Arises think about my writing? mine aren't as popular as yours but are they any good?

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Arises?? It's ARIES
uhh, but yeah I like it :3
I loved the separated wake me up very creative B3

Yanderemenhera

i use the bizarre spacing in my poetry a lot

Yanderemenhera

i have poems up on my youtube with the same stile lol, but they are pretty dark ngl