Poem 6 and 7 lmk what you think i really like these ones

[Jace123]

Poem

Day by day

I keep searching for another way
there is no other way
this is the only way

time and time again
I fall and fall but i must prevail

i chose this way,
I must do what i say

No matter what i always pray
Dear god be my hands in battle and clear this pathh
and prevail me from all of this worlds wrath
lead the saint forgive thoses who has sinned

And lead them to a path

Unclasps my hands open my eyes
god has helped me for he opened my eyes

poem 7

Snow drifts to the ground where it will forever be bound

sunlight blooms the flowers after so many weeks of showers

No more snow unbound my the sunlight that it found

gentle breeze no more freezes

running, fleeting, walking talking many faces that have been to so many places

the suns rays of heat leaves marks on my skin that sting but that what summer brings

Yet a reminder that of winter always lingers finding away to grasp with its frosted tipped fingers
seasons go by fall,winter,spring and summer

they pass for so many reasons but i always ask why? i wish they all could last forver but i know thats a lie

[xenth]

the snow one is really beautiful, you put alot of work in all of these :) good job!

[Jace123]

@xenth i have like 40 wrotten so smth like that these are my olds ones v been busy so i havet really wrotten new ones yet