Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it

[Jace123]

@4R14 thanks reread it im done

[Jace123]

hope u like it it took a while

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 wht do u think

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 I LIKE IT!!! W JACE!

[Jace123]

thank u

[roronoa zoro]

not bad u did amazing

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy thank you

[Jace123]

lmk how i can improve

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 how can improve tho

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 said in Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it:

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

Yeah i always do i have tremors so its hard to type perfectly all the times like i wamt feedback if u see anythng tht is lackng in my poems

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 Nah man I think you're good.

[Jace123]

thank u man

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy do you have any recommendations on how i can improve

[Jace123]

i need feedback

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Summer is hot,
"I like you Mrs. Barenger, i like you a lot."

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Hatred must end,
"You must never refer to Japanese people as our little yellow friend!"

[Jace123]

@welcome2myworld wa?

[M3owMix]

Roses are red,
Pink is cute,
If you don't understand me,
I WILL GIVE YA THE BOOT!!

[Jace123]

what?