Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it

[Jace123]

lmk how i can improve

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 how can improve tho

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

[Jace123]

@FlavPlaz45129 said in Another Poem (Wht u think?) ITS DONE READ IT please give feedback if u read it:

@Jace123 I don't exactly know. You already have perfect grammar.

Yeah i always do i have tremors so its hard to type perfectly all the times like i wamt feedback if u see anythng tht is lackng in my poems

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Jace123 Nah man I think you're good.

[Jace123]

thank u man

[Jace123]

@foxyfemboy do you have any recommendations on how i can improve

[Jace123]

i need feedback

[welcome2myworld]

Roses are red,
Summer is hot,
"I like you Mrs. Barenger, i like you a lot."

[welcome2myworld]

Roses are red,
Hatred must end,
"You must never refer to Japanese people as our little yellow friend!"

[Jace123]

@welcome2myworld wa?

[welcome2myworld]

Roses are red,
Pink is cute,
If you don't understand me,
I WILL GIVE YA THE BOOT!!

[Jace123]

what?

[welcome2myworld]

Roses are red,
Red as a rose,
This case is not open,
You can shove it up ya nose!

[itscookiebear]

rose r red vilotes r blue i like this peom and u should too

[Jace123]

@itscookiebear tuff

[Jace123]

@welcome2myworld when will i understand you lol

[Jace123]

its like a riddle lol

[Chicken]

W in da chat

[Jace123]

@Chicken thoughts on the poem?