creative songwriter
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ok so im going to start posting some of my song/rap writings
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cool
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I would love to see them.
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Betrayal
[Hook] you stabbed me in the back now im bleeding in gold turned my love to a weapon now my hearts cold i gave you the crown you threw dirt on the throne now im bossed up heavy and im doing it alone
[verse 1] i was solid like steel you were plastic and fake, played chess with my sould now im raising the stakes you whisphered sweet lies now the echo in pain im the storm in your sky watch me dance in the rain
[verse 2] you wanted my drip now you drowning in shame im the fire in the booth yoursmoke with no flame i built you a empire you burned down the gates now im stackin my wins whie you choke on hate
[Bridge] no apoligies keep your fake tears im the queen of revenge been grinding for years turn betrayal to power yeah i flipped the script now my name in lights crown gon drip
[outro] betrayal aint silent it screams in the dark cuts deep like ablade leaves a permanent mark i rise from the ashes no fear no chains you lost a real one- remember the name
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Betrayal
[Hook] you stabbed me in the back now im bleeding in gold turned my love to a weapon now my hearts cold i gave you the crown you threw dirt on the throne now im bossed up heavy and im doing it alone
[verse 1] i was solid like steel you were plastic and fake, played chess with my sould now im raising the stakes you whisphered sweet lies now the echo in pain im the storm in your sky watch me dance in the rain
[verse 2] you wanted my drip now you drowning in shame im the fire in the booth yoursmoke with no flame i built you a empire you burned down the gates now im stackin my wins whie you choke on hate
[Bridge] no apoligies keep your fake tears im the queen of revenge been grinding for years turn betrayal to power yeah i flipped the script now my name in lights crown gon drip
[outro] betrayal aint silent it screams in the dark cuts deep like ablade leaves a permanent mark i rise from the ashes no fear no chains you lost a real one- remember the name
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gosh...thanks
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any suggestions or feed back?...im all ears
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Betrayal
[Hook] you stabbed me in the back now im bleeding in gold turned my love to a weapon now my hearts cold i gave you the crown you threw dirt on the throne now im bossed up heavy and im doing it alone
[verse 1] i was solid like steel you were plastic and fake, played chess with my sould now im raising the stakes you whisphered sweet lies now the echo in pain im the storm in your sky watch me dance in the rain
[verse 2] you wanted my drip now you drowning in shame im the fire in the booth yoursmoke with no flame i built you a empire you burned down the gates now im stackin my wins whie you choke on hate
[Bridge] no apoligies keep your fake tears im the queen of revenge been grinding for years turn betrayal to power yeah i flipped the script now my name in lights crown gon drip
[outro] betrayal aint silent it screams in the dark cuts deep like ablade leaves a permanent mark i rise from the ashes no fear no chains you lost a real one- remember the name
@Cry_babyRoyalty wanna chat? I write music, not lyrics, and you seem to be the opposite
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This is pretty good and i can relate to it a little
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uhhhhhhh- I don't wanna rain on anybody's parade, when I wanna learn more Abt the song I realized it was either AI or smth π₯Ί


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uhhhhhhh- I don't wanna rain on anybody's parade, when I wanna learn more Abt the song I realized it was either AI or smth π₯Ί


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@KiwiFarmsArkavel ya
i also think is ai cuz of the way it repeats n it js feels ...
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@KiwiFarmsArkavel ya
i also think is ai cuz of the way it repeats n it js feels ...
wrong?@macncheese. said in creative songwriter:
@KiwiFarmsArkavel ya
i also think is ai cuz of the way it repeats n it js feels ...
wrong?Indeed
AI and Creativity do not mix AT ALL
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whoa there pookie bear its not Ai i absolutely will not use ai i dont beleive in that [CENSORED]
but i do believe in haters
if you have something to say put it in a different convo not mine thnx -
whoa there pookie bear its not Ai i absolutely will not use ai i dont beleive in that [CENSORED]
but i do believe in haters
if you have something to say put it in a different convo not mine thnx@Cry_babyRoyalty said in creative songwriter:
whoa there pookie bear its not Ai i absolutely will not use ai i dont beleive in that [CENSORED]
but i do believe in haters
if you have something to say put it in a different convo not mine thnxit isn't really hate if the checkers show 100% tbf