sad story,,..
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one day, dingus had a dream.. to change the world. he went to go to his mom and tell her.. dingus then tripped and went down a well for eternity.
Thoughts? Any way i can improve my writing?
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Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
Here you go
One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was deadGetting banned soon!!
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Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
Here you go
One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was deadThe OG FNaF fans ☆ feral for leon kennedy I ♡ C.AI IMA BURN IN HELL, but<3 marble hornets enthusiasts BADDIESSS NERDS!!! stalker Mexican mommy issues Brony artist's.. Spotify ig we read fanfic lol D e p r e s s i o n . . . NOCTURNAL ☆Deftones☆ Single soad Deathnote ⁺‧₊˚ ཐི⋆♱⋆ཋྀ ˚₊‧⁺ Femboy enjoyers chat-perms Certified Michael Afton fans [simps] WARNING! STUPID! TIM BURTON 🖤 The Dark Side yaoi enjoyer Ryan= bisquito I ♥ Nirvana Boring ppl <3 fnaf nerds Odetarii Gang SCENE KIDS !! fashionable people ★1NT3RN3T K1DZ★ simps Horror Movie obsession I ❤️ The Smiths Gay People Anti Cringe did the dew Shadow Supremacy ★ Linkin park ★ 𖠋 Daddy issues short person mental health chat group meow certified saiki k fan Mentally Dead. Fireflies CASEOH FAN!! Fml Crazy In Love. Apollo Empire join if your gang ♡♥Bisexual♥♡ WaffleS ghosts little bbg 🤘Metal Fans🤘 Måneskin fans!! Co0l3stGuy Radiohead ☆★! Converse !☆★ Fridge Dwellers †2pac fans† Raven Empire Generic BrowseDNS Chat ★☆∴`Soiacw`∴★☆ Anti-Clanker Goth/emo/scene/other :3 chimken etears | Kemonomimi WSOAOC. OZZY OSBURNE TRIBUTE. "Screw you guys, I'm going home Sage's pooks IT'S OKAY TO PUNCH NAZIS Apollo ♡'s You! But 20$ is 20$ Clingy TwT ☆I ♥ LATINAS☆ CYBER YEAR 2000'S <3 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA purple gang Hot Cocoa •Cat Gang• i never sleep at night certified cool person Тотя N worshippers ☆Has Tiktok☆ high af swaggy girl Stupid group Domo@Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P
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@Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P
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The OG FNaF fans ☆ feral for leon kennedy I ♡ C.AI IMA BURN IN HELL, but<3 marble hornets enthusiasts BADDIESSS NERDS!!! stalker Mexican mommy issues Brony artist's.. Spotify ig we read fanfic lol D e p r e s s i o n . . . NOCTURNAL ☆Deftones☆ Single soad Deathnote ⁺‧₊˚ ཐི⋆♱⋆ཋྀ ˚₊‧⁺ Femboy enjoyers chat-perms Certified Michael Afton fans [simps] WARNING! STUPID! TIM BURTON 🖤 The Dark Side yaoi enjoyer Ryan= bisquito I ♥ Nirvana Boring ppl <3 fnaf nerds Odetarii Gang SCENE KIDS !! fashionable people ★1NT3RN3T K1DZ★ simps Horror Movie obsession I ❤️ The Smiths Gay People Anti Cringe did the dew Shadow Supremacy ★ Linkin park ★ 𖠋 Daddy issues short person mental health chat group meow certified saiki k fan Mentally Dead. Fireflies CASEOH FAN!! Fml Crazy In Love. Apollo Empire join if your gang ♡♥Bisexual♥♡ WaffleS ghosts little bbg 🤘Metal Fans🤘 Måneskin fans!! Co0l3stGuy Radiohead ☆★! Converse !☆★ Fridge Dwellers †2pac fans† Raven Empire Generic BrowseDNS Chat ★☆∴`Soiacw`∴★☆ Anti-Clanker Goth/emo/scene/other :3 chimken etears | Kemonomimi WSOAOC. OZZY OSBURNE TRIBUTE. "Screw you guys, I'm going home Sage's pooks IT'S OKAY TO PUNCH NAZIS Apollo ♡'s You! But 20$ is 20$ Clingy TwT ☆I ♥ LATINAS☆ CYBER YEAR 2000'S <3 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA purple gang Hot Cocoa •Cat Gang• i never sleep at night certified cool person Тотя N worshippers ☆Has Tiktok☆ high af swaggy girl Stupid group Domo@Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33
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@Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33
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