sad story,,..
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one day, dingus had a dream.. to change the world. he went to go to his mom and tell her.. dingus then tripped and went down a well for eternity.
Thoughts? Any way i can improve my writing?
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aww i'm so sorry
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Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
Here you go
One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was dead -
Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
Here you go
One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was deadThe OG FNaF fans ☆ feral for leon kennedy ☆Deftones☆ marble hornets enthusiasts I ❤️ The Smiths ⚠PROXY⦻ Certified Michael Afton fans [simps] •Cat Gang• Swagg_c3rt1fi3d<3 fnaf nerds IMA BURN IN HELL, but<3 ★1NT3RN3T K1DZ★ DM for life fake men lover swaggy girl s3rl Domo certified cool person ☆★! Converse !☆★ wolf and fox lovers IT'S OKAY TO PUNCH NAZIS Sage's pooks Apollo ♡'s You! Goth/emo/scene/other :3 Alex G Verified Invader But 20$ is 20$ Co0l3stGuy WARNING! STUPID! yaoi enjoyer Femboy enjoyers short person Gigachad Single Horror Movie obsession Mexican Fleshwater THE CURE Melt Ice Pierced people Young And Dumb WaffleS Ryan= bisquito@Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P
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@Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P
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@Sup3rSwaggyy1983 DRAMATEEC
The OG FNaF fans ☆ feral for leon kennedy ☆Deftones☆ marble hornets enthusiasts I ❤️ The Smiths ⚠PROXY⦻ Certified Michael Afton fans [simps] •Cat Gang• Swagg_c3rt1fi3d<3 fnaf nerds IMA BURN IN HELL, but<3 ★1NT3RN3T K1DZ★ DM for life fake men lover swaggy girl s3rl Domo certified cool person ☆★! Converse !☆★ wolf and fox lovers IT'S OKAY TO PUNCH NAZIS Sage's pooks Apollo ♡'s You! Goth/emo/scene/other :3 Alex G Verified Invader But 20$ is 20$ Co0l3stGuy WARNING! STUPID! yaoi enjoyer Femboy enjoyers short person Gigachad Single Horror Movie obsession Mexican Fleshwater THE CURE Melt Ice Pierced people Young And Dumb WaffleS Ryan= bisquito@Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33
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@Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33
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