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    one day, dingus had a dream.. to change the world. he went to go to his mom and tell her.. dingus then tripped and went down a well for eternity.

    Thoughts? Any way i can improve my writing?

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      aww i'm so sorry

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        Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
        Here you go
        One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was dead

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        • Yuniundefined Yuni

          Hmmm... Imma make this more Dramatic
          Here you go
          One day, 1972 February 12th, Dingus was dreaming of changing the world, He lived in an old hut with his Family, Dingus wanted to tell his mom His dream, His mom was at work, so he Couldn't wait, He ran around a field, Until he heard screaming from a well, It was a radio, He remembered how his dad wanted a radio, so he got in, for a week, he was missing, A man passed by and saw Dingus in the well, The man Helped dingus come back up, but it was too late. He was dead

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          @Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P

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            @Yuni-Just-weird its amazing, but use more conjuction words. Almost all of the commas are unnecessary, and could just be replaced with a period instead ;P

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            @Sup3rSwaggyy1983 DRAMATEEC

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            "When you take the trash out, do you come back out to check how it's doing? Exactly, so stop stalking your ex."

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              @Sup3rSwaggyy1983 DRAMATEEC

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              @Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33

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              • Sup3rSwaggyy1983undefined Sup3rSwaggyy1983

                @Yuni-Just-weird its not being dramatic, u js wrote a wholeass paragraph without proper punctuation >:33

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                @Sup3rSwaggyy1983 DREMETEK

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                [First text must be "cheese" so I dont get ya confused with someone ik]
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