@jainacore Honestly?....I'm oddly not surprised

@jainacore I-wha-i.....gorl.... why would a psychological horror get freaky

Chapter 1 Preview! This'll only be updated around maybe 9 times before y'all have to wait for me to finish the book! (unless I can't keep my mouth shut and yap about it) Again credits to @pawthetic for the idea! Feedback is greatly appreciated since i'm still working on Chapter 1 and tweaking the Prologue so gimme gimme!

Anyhoo with all that out the way
~Enjoy "Some Scummy Day!"~ <3
(it's short but hey it's smth)

!All the censors (!@?#$%&*) won't be in the final version they're just there for now cuz i'm writing this on a school account!

Chapter 1: "Some Scummy Day!"

“AH! #?!@ING HELL!” yelled Ava after being silent the whole time. If there’s one thing she hated the most, it was a bright light shining directly in her eyes.
“You kids alright?!” the man who was driving asked. It seemed as if he appeared out of thin air with how much the light was blinding them.
“Uh..yeah? We’re fine ... .I think” Dan said hesitantly. He was usually rather confident, quiet, but confident. Yet he sounded uncharacteristically shaken, scared almost.
Suddenly, everything felt cold, a gentle yet harsh breeze blew by.
“C’mon i’ll help you up” the man said. He had a friendly tone but sounded as if there was no room for argument. He immediately helped each of them up before asking with a concerned tone,
“What are you kids doing out here this late? Don’t you care about your safety?” he asked, voice tinged with concern.
“We’re trick-or-treating, that’s all,” Phoenix muttered, eager to end the conversation and crawl into bed. Jess nudged them gently, trying to lift the mood. Phoenix grumbled back — a silent 'buzz off.'
“Well do you kids know how to get home at least?” he asked.
“Of course we do, we have it on our phones.” Tom said a bit shakily, he was the only one noticeably rattled by the man. Though you couldn’t blame him, the man sounded friendly but his looks said otherwise. His clothes were ragged — torn and fraying like they’d survived a war. His voice was gravelly, as if he'd spent years coughing with no end. His skin was strange: dry and pale like bone, stretched over what looked more like skeleton than muscle. And yet... his car told a different story.
Sleek, white, and gleaming — one of those futuristic electric models everyone recognized. But something about it felt off. Too clean. Too perfect. It had the same shape as the others they’d seen, but it pulled at them, like it wanted them closer.

I sure do wonder if someone can find the reference in this....I mean I know someone probably will but still.

Oops I finished the prologue with 2 updates left, guess I gotta share some of the 1st chapter. (what a happy accident!....idk what's wrong with me today :'])

"Choo choo" -Jinu KPDH

@DrPancakee
BEAM ATTACK! Owh I missed i'll get him next time
BEAM ATTACK! Hah hah! Maybe this'll hit him!
BEAM ATT-WOA- [insert heavenly music]

@KG3M0 IT'S SO CUTE AHHHHHHH I WANNA PET ITTTTT (I also wanna name it for some reason-)

@C3M3T3RY_DR1VE I only really need cover art, I haven't really thought about how the characters look till you mentioned it

@BannaBurger Bet (Also what did you expect not peak? There's a reason I have a "~Poet~" group badge

Added the most recent part added to the prologue (I'll edit it only 2 more times before y'all have to wait till I decide to put a sneak peek of a different part)

@pawthetic Oh nah I take this stuff seriously if I say imma start a project I will lol. Again thx for the idea i've been having a blast writing it and I don't even have that much! (Literally when I just came up with the name I started kicking my feet )

@SupearMan Ok I can't make up my mind but i'm in a way better mood so i'm calling this off till I feel like shit again (might be tomorrow idk)

A novel based off this message from @pawthetic (huge thanks for the idea! I luv working on it ;3)


This is all of the prologue! I hope y'all like it! <3

!All the censors (!@?#$%&*) won't be in the final version they're just there for now cuz i'm writing this on a school account!

Prologue

1904 Lakesfield Dr 2022
11/01/22 5:02 AM

“C’mon pick up the pace you guys! We don’t have nearly enough candy!” exclaimed Jess to the others
“How do we not?! I’m holding like…90 !?#@ing pounds in four pillow cases!” yelled Damian, despite his tough exterior, he was more than ready to call it quits as he huffed and puffed up the hill.
It was a cold, late, post-storm halloween night, the group of Jess, Damian, Nicholas, Phoenix, Ivy, Ava, Dan, and the twins, Tom and Trixie, were still up late by themselves. Their parents stayed in asleep while they each snuck out to go trick or treating. It may have been wet and the middle of the night but the kids wanted their candy no matter what.
“Jess…..huff how do you still have all that energy?!” Trixie asked tired from running around town
“Yeah, like we’ve been out here since 12 somethin! It’s 5 now! How the hell are you not tired?” asked Tom, also curious about Jess's mass amounts of energy.
“I may have eaten ‘most’ of the candy….Sorry not sorry! Ya snooze you-”
“Let’s just get home PLEASE!!! “ groaned Phoenix
“B-but I ate all the candy alrea-” Jess began to mutter before getting cut off by Nicholas-
“ALL?! DUDE WHAT THE F-”
“Ay! AY! Calm the hell down! Fighting isn’t gonna solve the fact that she ate all her candy.”
Damian said, getting between the two to avoid an altercation. The last thing he wanted was to deal with the two fighting AGAIN! The two arguing is already a pain in the #?$ to him.
Nicholas yelled, trying to push by, “LET ME AT HER, DAMMIT!!!” Damian pushed against him while Jess stood clutching her candy as if she cared more about its safety than her own. Nicholas was shaking with fury, swinging his arms every which way before finally relenting and collapsing against Damian in begrudging defeat.
Nicholas let out an annoyed grumble as Damian, who was already struggling with the pounds of candy in his hands, struggled to hold Nicholas up.
“Dude you’re gonna break my #?!@ing back! Get off!” Damian exclaimed angrily, gasping for air.
Jess took a few steps back, shaken by Nicholas’s sudden outburst even though it was normal for him to lash out over trivial things.
“Geez…You need to learn how to calm the #?!@ down, Nick” Jess said as she continued to take steps away, trying to distance herself as far away from Nicholas as possible without getting too far from the group.
“C’mon Jess, don’t provoke him. He’s just gonna wanna hit you more…” Ivy said, speaking up after being silent almost the whole trip.
“Damn right I do.” Nicholas grumbled into Damian, still aggravated but not enough to lunge at Jess like a cat anymore. He pushed himself up and Damian took a big breath, desperate for air.
The group looked around the damp, deserted streets. It was so silent you could hear a pin drop. Nothing seemed out of the ordinary; the crickets chirped, and leaves rustled in the background. But the streetlights buzzed erratically, their flickering rhythm unsettling. Then, the wind blew—hard enough to lift the pillowcases of candy, sending them tumbling to the ground under the weight.
“$#!?” yelled Phoenix in shock and slight pain from the road scraping across their skin.
The group struggled to get up, it was odd. The bags weighed tons but they were carrying it just fine before. Have their limbs given up on them early or something else entir-

Honk!

Their heads turned, confused, hearing the nearby car as headlights suddenly glared into their souls. The lights seemed so bright with how dark it was and how little light the group's eyes had taken from being out so late for so long.
A man suddenly appeared in front of them, it was almost like he came out of nowhere due to the light making it near impossible for the group to see even themselves.

That’s the whole prologue but I’m still tweaking things!
Feedback is greatly appreciated! Whether it’s the dialogue, pacing, or even tiny word choices! Go wild (cuss at me if you gotta—I’m built for brutality!)

(The reason why there's an address at the start will make sense in a few chapters trust ;3)

Reviving this with my most recent status
Cord: supiestar (feel free to friend me)

@GooXy Bet

I'm bored soooo....give me Minecraft skin ideas and i'll (try) to make them! (Don't expect the skins to be good I'm testing myself)

@KiwiFarmsArkavel Physical contact is a no no sowwy (It's 2:15 AM I need sleep-)

@KiwiFarmsArkavel Nope :']

I forgot I was gonna do this.....yeah i'm still going on that break real soon