My poem.. 🥺🥺️️

[niconiconico]

@w1ckedsticky1983 omfg this is so tuff

[Takuji]

if I were to analyze this objectively the structure is chaotic at best. The emoji usage is... excessive. 'Ballerina cappuccina' appears to be nonsense, yet it's somehow the most memorable line. The confidence is clear and intense Misguided I guess? But confident. You claim to be 6'7, which I have no way to verify, and you've challenged LeBron James a claim that lacks... supporting evidence . But eh I've read worse. 5/10. The snail emoji choice was interesting

[w1ckedsticky1983]

@ayano_koji "chut up" ️️/ref

Anyways, I don't really care about whatever else you said, but the structure is pretty simple if you know how to actually find it. Majority of the stanzas Follow a basic back-to-back rhyme scheme, the only outlier here is the 4th line and like 2 others, but eh

[topratedsalesman]

tuff ahh poem sticky

[Citrussahh]

this is too tuff...

[Takuji]

@w1ckedsticky1983 You're not wrong about the rhyme scheme. A simple AABB structure is easy enough to spot. However, focusing only on the obvious outliers like the fourth line means you are missing the actual pattern.

[w1ckedsticky1983]

@ayano_koji Your useless amount of perspicacity you coin towards this unserious poem is mildly amusing. 2/10. It would be a 2.5, but I genuinely can't understand what the hell you're trying to say/the point you're aiming to make unless I reread it 17 times/j

Eehgghhhghhj sm editz cuz I'm a chud who can't type properly

[Takuji]

@w1ckedsticky1983 My verbosity was unnecessary. To be honest, I found the poem entertaining but overthought my response trying to match the energy. That's my mistake 'Perspicacity' was a good word choice, by the way. Most people wouldn't bother with precision while roasting someone. But As for the typos I understood you fine. Communication doesn't require perfection, just mutual comprehension. Though I suspect you knew that already and are being self-deprecating for comedic effect. 2.5/10 accepted. I'll do better next time. Or I won't. It probably doesn't matter.

[w1ckedsticky1983]

@ayano_koji either you're using ai, or really utilizing Google to find all those synonyms and "big words"

[Takuji]

@w1ckedsticky1983 said in My poem.. 🥺🥺️️:

either

Am larping so I gotta smart Larp

[w1ckedsticky1983]

@ayano_koji Ykw, props to you for that lowk. But if you're gonna be a dorky narc, its gyatta come from the heart 🥺🥺

[Innocent]

This poem is so... it makes me feel...

[A Former User]

A white tear ran down my thigh /JKJKJK ️

[Innocent]

A horrifying joke actually

[A Former User]

@Innocent heheheh…

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Echo_isnt_here WHAAAAATTT!?!?!?!?!??!

[A Former User]

Hehehheh

[FlavPlaz45129]

@Echo_isnt_here that's enough post reading for today

[w1ckedsticky1983]

urm

[A Former User]

im so sorry